I heard from someone that my stories are very difficult to read and make them crazy trying to figure out what I’m trying to say.  I thought about it…for a second….and then decided I will continue to write the way I am writing.  For instance:

Normal (for me) writing:

We wuz sudnly faced with a momentus decidin factor uf what ta do now.  Duz we go on an face the unknowed, or duz we turn tail an git outa here with ours hair?

Not Normal (for me) writing about the same subject:

We were suddenly faced with a very difficult decision.  Do we go on knowing that there could be a disaster ahead that might cause us to lose a life or two or maybe some other serious injury.  Or do we turn back on the trail we know is safer than what we might face by going ahead?

NA!  I like the shorter version…it might be harder to read, but it leaves the reader a whole lot more interpretation of “what the heck is he saying exactly”!

Enjoy!

Bears Butt  the man with the “dot com”!!!